Gadi.

7/10 Mmm....what does this guy have to do with happiness?? I GOT A NEW AVATAR! (All The Lonely People:) Eleanor Rigby)

HAHA ! This made me laugh. It's a combination of Ron Weasley and that guy you always see being quiet in class, laid back, but really funny sometimes. I like ...

WOW! Where do you live? The big, golden cloud one looks so much like something I've seen. Where'd you take those pictureS? The streetlights...wow. I love that picture. :)

Eek! I love this, it's just I don't know if it's a girl or a boy...the lips, it's those lips! Boys don't have those lips! :)

1) I LOVE THIS ONE. It's funny, and yet really smart. I especially like the dimensions. 2) WOW! I bet it has. The lines in the trunk seem so delicate, ...

I agree--the beginning is kinda rocky, and there are some parts that just zap the whole song (like "So don't let them Call you an angel. Because then You are ...

I think all the people above already said everything, but here are a few minor suggestions: "With confusion..." Completely agree with Clau. Way too tell-not-show. "Straight backed against the chair." ...

WOW! I loved this! It feels so full of charisma and intellect...how the heck did you do it? It's amazing! What does it mean, the divided part?

I like this, but not as much as the other people. It's an amazing concept, but I would have liked one of them to stand out more-either the people would ...

I LOVE THIS THING. The first one is obviously the best. It conveys childhood in a way unique to people who grew up in sticky places. :) I also like ...

Nice! I like it a lot. It has a special, aching meaning I think. Sort of like a person drowning in the color orange.

I can't wait either. It's going to be my first nano, so I need some serious tips. I didn't even decide on my story outline! Help me..... I have some ...

The first stanza has several problems. As I walk to the valley of death… {Why the three dots?} It is a site to behold. {This is telling us. Plus, delete ...

Um... I don't really like this. It's kind of bland, punctuated wrongly, slit in all of the wrong places, and has a cliched message. Here are some tips about how ...

I don't know if this is good, but we could disregard this if it completely goes away from the general idea of this storybook. --------------------------------------------------------------------------