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Nice! What I liked about this is that it was about us, about the world, about the universe. It's sort of like the big bang, but it's also about the ...

I am debating whether to have my title Incense My Grandmother's Chicken That Crossed the Road or Dead Fish ... :)

I liked the first one a lot. It had a scarlet, furious aura all about it. The third one was really bland.

Danny finally woke up from his waken sleep and asked, "What are you doing here?" "Long story, Danny." Ronny said. "Well, I'd like to hear it!" Althea looked away. "We ...

"That if someone dies, their dead" They're=They are, Their="Their house", there="There was a house" "crying as people placed" People is a cliche. Say "family and friends" or "mourners". "best guy-frie

Nice! It feels really deep. I especially liked the last line. My favorite stanza was the allusion to the cross, it makes it so much more spiritual. This was, however, ...

This was good. I liked how the poem flowed, how the rhythm was original but almost familiar. This is, however, quite telly. You don't show us anything! The first line ...

I like it. But I am a little disappointed, that such an excellent exercise has no theme or message at all. I've seen a few motifs, a few symbols, but ...

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I really like this! It's comical in a way, but could also be an authentic story. Awesome rhymes, too! (squeeze, please) I WANT MORE! MORE VERSES PLEASE!

Sorry to disappoint you....but this is rather terrible. Now, don't get all depressed--it's just that I hate cliches! And this poem was one cliche after another. I mean, how many ...

Sorry to critique again....it's just that I returned to this poem and I thought, "Oooooh, where do I remember this from?" And then I saw my critique. Whcih brings me ...

WOW! Amazing. It's an original page-turner, to say the least. First off, Clarice and Hanibal are brilliant together. I watched the movie after reading the book, and I have to ...

Nice! It's not the best, but it's pretty good. Some suggestions: "I reflect on nothing." Ugh. Nasty line. Awkward, too much. It doesn't have a tune to it, especially as ...

WOW. I love this poem! It's very professional, and completely full of originality, wit, and description. The ending, however, is poor. Usually, good poems end with an image, a metaphoe, ...