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Re: Zip
Orion kept hitting the dirt with his hoove, when Senna asked him, "What is your name?" "Orion. And yours?" "Senna." "Why are you here?" Now she looked away. "It's daylight." ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: YWS Quote Script
You never really learn to swear until you learn to drive . ~Author Unknown
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Hii
HELLO! WELCOM Chrissie! I am Gadi. How are you? Don't get addicted to this site. I already am. :) HAVE FUN! Post lots of stories and critique even more!
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
8/10 Very nice.
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Man Allegedly Bites Dog As Punishment
I can't believe people can be so dim-witted. That guy is seriously mental. Which reminds me----NEVER EAT AT KFC! They boil the chickens in oil while they are still alive, ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Smoking ban in public places [UK]
Smokers are addicted. None of them want to continue smoking, but they can't smoke. That's why this law is good! It can help them stop, plus it will help us ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Hi,my name is hamilton...;p
Hey Hamilton/Julia! I think I might call you Hammy too... :) Anyways, Welcome! This is the best site ever. You get addicted straight from the start. Have fun writing stories, ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: The last war
"Emptiness inside of a person is really a drain of life. A happiness long forgotten. " This seemed very cliche, plus it's a tell, not show. Make sure to describe ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Hahaha this is funny :)
HAHAHAHA! I loved this. Ha. Not really writing, but still quite amusing, and time-consuming for an old fart like me. :) Hilarious. Can I borrow it and use it on ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Surreality
This was so good! The only problem I had with it was that sometimes I thought it was too good. Sometimes, all the intellectual goodness of the story seemed to ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Accio Deathly Hallows
Haha! "Or if Voldemort killed Hedwig just for yucks" :) So sad, true, and FUNNY HAHAHA
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: This may have no explicit content but it will be "R&quo
Ugh. Rap is okay, but this one, if made into real song, would be really bad. SORRY! It's just that rap is only good if it's: A) Unique, like is ...
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Re: Forest Lament
Wow! I like this a lot. What do you mean it isn't yours? Who is Stella?
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Zip
Orion was digging through the earth with his hooves, looking for some kind of rat or mouse he could have. All the grass was gone from the ground, it was ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Zip
Name: Orion Age: 92 Race: Centaur Gender: Male Appearence: Brown, hairy legs and bottom; white above waist, gray hair, beard, abs. Personality: Intelligent, strong, moral, short temper, hates humans,
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