Gadi.

Oops! Sorry! I'll try to read it in a different light now. "metres" British! :) "yellow sport shirt rippled across his muscular abs" This is kind of cliche. Can't he ...

I am doing a face filled with a deep blank. What the heck? I really could not understand this poem, sorry. I mean, it has a universal theme. Too universal. ...

Sorry, Lucy, but I didn't like this. I mean, it had some nice concepts...but the portrayal, the rhythm, the elements...na. I think you should either work harder on this piece ...

7/10. I don't know him! But I like the rain.

"Grab one end of the bag." They dumped the body in the stream next to Sixty-Second St. and he drove to one of their friends' place. There was no other ...

500 words I want you to write. It doesn’t matter what, as long as it’s good. My English teacher puts a gun to my head and screams at me. I ...

This was really intellectual. Bizarre. Complex. And only in three lines!

"Why the hell did you do that?" She yelled at Ronny. They were running down the alleyways, as far away from the bar as possible, towards his apartment. "I...you told ...

6/10 (SORRY) I guess it's okay? Not too original, not too emotional, but it's black and white and it has the word love in it. ??? EDIT: Yay! You changed ...

He put his gun back into his belt. There were so many things he wanted to yell at Brain, that bastard. Althea saved his life. That was her reason to ...

What the hell is she thinking? What is she gonna do, who she gonna kill? She grabbed him and led him out the back door, Justin staring as they left. ...

"Manizha was halfway aware of the fact " At first glance it was rather confusing. Otherise, excellent beginning! "Clinging to her cornhusk doll, Sally," At first I thought you switched ...

8/10 I AGREE! TOTALLY!

9/10 I like it!

"What the f*** do you think you're doing?" "I don't know. What am I doing?" Ronny looked at Althea for a few seconds before saying, "I...I think you are doing ...