Gadi.

Oh. Well, now that I know it's not original... DARN IT! I hate it when things aren't original. It's the thing that upsets me the most. Well, thank you very ...

At first, it was just a little weed. It was tiny and delicate, just a little splinter of emerald raising its head out of the dirt. The roots have just ...

Ronny went to talk with Kurokawa who was smoking cig after cig next to the doors of the nightclub. "Listen to me. They are all gonna gang up on you! ...

Either: A) She is very romantic, but is sort of intellectual. She is smart and can use people to her advantage. (The Turtles) B) Just a forlorn personality, a tad ...

A girl who's broken apart between her family and her own choice of life. She is weak but grows stronger and stronger. Sort of like Astrid from White Oleander. Julia ...

What a beautiful book! So moving! So mature! So playful! So descriptive! So emotional! So true! So cultural! So beautiful! It's about a young girl growing up to become a ...

Ronny was smoking in an alleyway off Seventy-Six St. when Tanya approached him, a black look in her eyes. Her dark skin and tattoo were invisible in the Dark, but ...

8/10 Nice. I agree! There's a better way of saying it though: I have to grow old. But I don't have to grow up. or something like that.

His phone vibrated. "Hello?" 'Hey. It's me Althea. I have some good news." "Me too." Her voice was clear and strong. "Brian's not our leader anymore. He decided to let ...

6/10 Sorry man, I really have no idea who that is. But I mean, everybody liked it so I guessed it's a cool person, but I gave you a 6 ...

Excellent! "we didn’t mind;'" That kind of stops the flow. Maybe put it in the next line, or maybe delete the "When" in the beginning of the sentence. "it was ...

Well Hellllllllllllo! You going to have fun here! And I see you are from South Africa! I bet I know what your favorite song is....... "IN THE JUNGLE THE QUIET ...

Ronny waited for his drink on a stool in the nightclub. People were dancing just a few feet away, touching each other, feeling one another, everyone invloved in their own ...

Ronny woke up and exited the apartment with a joint in his mouth. HE was clean, dressed in his best black. He would show up at the funeral. No one ...

Ronny stepped in and immediately scanned the crowd for enemies. Then he came to sit in front of Althea. "Oh my god! You freaking scared me?" "Did you tell your ...