Gadi.

8/10 It's funny. In an un-funny way. :) And by the way, Prosithion's is awesome. That is one of the best songs ever!!!!

The opening didn't really catch my attention. I am not looking for intense action, just for some interesting line or subject. "Alien breath" is excellent, but after that, I don't ...

I was just flippin' through my favorite magazine of all times (WD :) ) when I noticed a young writer's section. (I got it on 2005 but failed to check ...

This story was kind of cliche. And how did the father killed his daughter? Or am I getting it all wrong? Even though the first ending is very...climatic, they are ...

Ronny rushed to his apartment, his mind still fresh with the encounter. It was a death-life experienced, he thought as he climbed the stairs to his apartment on the east ...

7/10 Sorry. Didn't really understand it. Didn't make me feel....emotion? Or funny? But I sort of liked it...I guessed.

Ronny was walking towards the club. The night was alive with flashing sallow lights, but as he approached it, a figure emerged suddenly from a dark alley to his right. ...

Name: Ronny Parrot Age: 19 Gender: Male Gang: Eastern Eagles Personality: He is tough, but not as tough as other guys. He breaks down under pressure sometimes, and is terrified ...

Prologue 1999 The dogs were no longer barking. All twenty-three of them lay in their tiny cages, their noses dry, their eyes red. Their breaths were minute, soundless, arid. Their ...

Nice. Okay, I started this and thought: It sounds good, but what is the meaning? What does it say? I mean, behind all the words, does it have anything? But ...

Okay. I agree with everyone above: this has potential to it, especially the first paragraph. The second, uh...not so much. It was a little cliche. And we REALLY don't understand ...

I liked it. It's not amazing, but it had a...unique personality to it, if you know what I mean. First off, does the bench have any symbolism? Does it connect ...

Why was this dull? Because it was an article. It was like a newspaper review of a camp, with no intrigue or really any original method of presenting information. You ...

It took me a few seconds to understand it... And I wasn't too happy with it... But it's kind of funny/true.... But not really... So 7/10

This has neither the letter "a" nor the word "the". It's called constrained writing. I am not racist at all by writing this, it's just what came out of my ...