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"getting in my nerves" *on* "I kicked him yesterday. I did." Haha! I like this, it's like we don't believe you, but when you say "I did" we do. Wow, ...

Over the wind and rain, a faint cry of pain and sorrow could be heard. A faint cry of pain and sorrow could be heard over the wind and rain. ...

This was really interesting! Couldn't find any mistakes. Actually, I have biology for period one too, and I found a lot familarities (ouch spelling) between what I think and what ...

Good job! Watch your punctuation though. You forget where you put them sometimes! "three bombs went off in a small park but this was no ordinary bomb" three bombs went ...

Water for Elephants. The beginning was good, but I really don't know when the story actually starts. It's kind of dull now, actually. I finished The Hours like five days ...

Should I seriously write more satires? Because satires were always hard for me to create, but that one came really easily...and I never thought I was good with yeah... Another ...

"The clearing floor was covered in deep, velvety moss that echoed the majestic color of the foliage above. " Delete majestic (show, not tell) and put something else. Otherwise the ...

Excellent! I think you are describing a dancing scene, right? "Skip the change and close the frame" was the only line that I was really confused about. What does it ...

As you please, you wonderful oaf! You really caught my attention with all the details of his bathroom. Maybe just mellow down as you go along on them, so it ...

Tomatoism Spain’s New National Religion MADRID, SPAIN—After years of dilemmas with the country’s national religion, Catholicism, His Majesty Juan Carlos I has decided to change Spain’s nationa

This is due on Wednesday. Please tell me if it's good or not! Julia’s Blossoming Every parent must let go of their children. They struggle, they cry, they fight—but in ...

I loved it! I don't really think the review above really focused on the things in this poem I found important (sorry guys!!!). So, here are my ideas, all anotized ...

Maybe you should put a spoiler mark before you give the ending and the climax and all that,,,,and the important parts, I mean.

I READ IT! OMG, I actually finished it this THURSDAY! I am watching the movie tomorrow! Here's my view on it: The first three-fourths were kind of too deep and ...

Good job! I didn't really like the line breaks, until I saw that THEY LOOKED LIKE A TORNADO TOO! Like this -------------------------------- ------------------------ --------------- ------ -- -