Gadi.

WOW! Excellent story there! I loved it. The character, the background, the description...nice. Two things: She leans on walking stick less and less and her mind wanders on the walking ...

That was pretty good. Wasn't the usual lyrics you would expect, because this one almost read as a poem. Add just a bit more rhythm by making inner rhymes and ...

Okay, I will be doing this as I go. Kyle noticed this two. *too. since Hayley was a sister to him "like a sister to him", please. Otheriwise, too close ...

Confusing! But I can see potential. Are the characters sheep? Is that what you are trying to do? Because if it is, maybe you should keep that till the end, ...

PG 13 for drug reference. Please feel free to rip this thing apart. And remember, I do Review4Review! ------------------------------------------ She fetched a yellow cab off the gray streets of the ...

I really liked it! At first I thought the story was about a nobody man, somebody who is alone and doesn't know anybody, isn't friends with anybody, and is really ...

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Hey! I am criticquing this as I read along, so please don't be mad at me. multi-storey Should be multy-story, but maybe apartment building is better. However she was keeping ...

Wow! I really, really liked this! It was....superb at the least. I agree with everyone above me: the plot and the characters were so excellently crafted! The first part was ...

I sit at a table, can’t wait till it’s all over. Cheeses of all kinds are scattered on gleaming plates all across the eight-seat table, fat and luscious watermelon slices ...

I hated that book. Okay, no, I simply disliked it--I read it all in five days, but it was just so depressing and lonesome that I found it just a ...

I read it. It wasn't really fitting to be a classic, but I think it has evolved into one. I liked it a lot, though it's not really one of ...

I read five, though there were at least ten where I started or got halfway through and got so frustrated with them I just threw them at somebody. But there's ...

I read it and I loved it. It was amazing, moving, bizarre, and really gave me an insight into another world. I really liked how in the middle of a ...

I read it too. I don't remember much of it, but it kind of showed the emo side but really connecting us with the girl. It was really weird, the ...