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I read My Sister's Keeper. It wasn't a classic or anything, I mean there was nothing precisely amazingly literary about it, but the philosophical idea was really what hit the ...

Here are three things that make poetry good: 1) Meaning. Every poem needs to have a meaning, and it can be any, from how intolerance is wrong to blue flamingos ...

WOWOWOW! I liked it! Two suggestions: But every society has its day, I suppose. Do you really need the "I suppose" in there? Or maybe you should say But every ...

I liked it! Suggestions: I am a Jew, and in synagogue we don't bend our knees. :) I liked all the parts. Especially this one: They needed land, a Zionist ...

She snorts with me, together. Nobody speaks. Your skin makes me shiver. She slowly drops the pills into the glass, I watch as they melt inside, as she swirls the ...

Nice! Here is the main thought (sort of philosophical really) that ran through my head while readin your story the second time: Every idea. no matter how bad it is, ...

Wow! I liked it! It was really intriguing, though I had to read it a second time in order to really understand it. It really gave off the feeling of ...

wow! Nice! I liked it! Of course, it was just a tad hard to understand what was happening, not reading the first parts of the story, but I felt compelled ...

(Capitals means I have put it there--look at the new organization of the poem too) When I look into your eyes, all my troubles fly {NOT TOO ORIGINAL--SAY FLUTTER OR ...

Wow! You are brilliant! This seems quite proffessional, and some parts were so simple, yet complicated, that I had to reread them out loud. Incredibly well-done! Somehow, however, the line ...

Nice! I liked it! I have a few suggestions. "she looked like Bonnie Wright, Ginny from the Harry Potter movies, of course he didn't dare tell her that." I really ...

Excellent! I liked this one much more! The only trouble I have is that the last sentence seems sort of... not cliche, but amateaur. "I had already thrown the wedding ...

Good job! First, "Unless you’re tyring to loose weight" should be "Unless you are trying to lose weight". I think you should delete this sentence--it sort of confused me, and ...

Nice! Here are a few suggestions: the cold water making me a bit shivery It's always too cheesy to say something made someone ____--it's something a five-year old would say. ...

Nice! It was touching in its simple ways, but very solemn in the topics of a single mother. You've created a little To Kill A Mockingbird. It's excellent. But who ...