Gadi.

WOW! Those pictures are simply amazing. I loved how the color was very contrasted from the rest of the photograph--thought eh background was a bit distracting. In the first one, ...

It's great! I will, however, make a few suggestions: What hurts is that you’d hold her, The same way you held me; That you’d whisper in her ear, Make her ...

It's good. I can't say I liked it, because the story itself is very wicked and sad. I can't imagine the terrible action of the story! I have several things ...

NEVER leave something unfinished. Otherwise you can never take credit for it.

NICE! I liked it! It's incredibly intriguing and I can only say that what attracted me the most to this piece was my curiosity to see what will happen next ...

Nice! I liked it! Here are my comments and critique: I liked the first sentence. It was sort of philosophical, in a way--every end is a new beginning. You told ...

Wow! This prologue was certainly a jump. A few things: When you identify them by the color of their eyes, please use colors which are much easier to identify. You ...

Thank you all for your critiques and comments! I appreciate your honesty and I will make sure to revise it accordingly!

The best part and the majorly beautiful effect of this peace is the rhyme and rhythm. It sounded really good. I read it out loud twice and could still hear ...

1: Uh, it's okay--much better than anything of mine anyhow--but what are the unshaded parts and the dots in the background? 2: Wow! You put so much muscle on that ...

I liked it! Send it somewhere! I particularly liked the last line. It made me think of horizon. But maybe after "glow" you should take away the period to let ...

Nice! I loved the ending. It had a very sweet story/plotline, and told in a unique method. Here are my doubts: The character speak as if they are in a ...

Again, excellent. I just like your voice and the story itself is nicely done. But now I am already kind of tired. Is the sotry about her troubles with alcohol, ...

I can't understand how people found it boring! That was fantastic! It gave me the chills! I don't like fantasy much, so when i opened the forum for fantasy and ...

All the Birds \ By Gadi C. All the birds have flown up and gone; A lonely cloud floats leisurely by. We never tire of looking at each other - ...