Gadi.

Nice! The character really did develop there, and we understood the story as it rolled along. Here is my most major criticism/critique of your story: The reader cannot just start ...

Nice Sonnet! It really kept me up to the last beat, because Soneets always have a nice little method of surprising the reader. The story itself was incredibly entertaining, and ...

:lol: Well my name is Gadi. I am thirteen. That's all I will say, except that I love writing and hope to establish new writing bonds between other members. I ...