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Hey, this is a good piece and it creates a good image such as 'I found you, slumped and dozy in your chair. An aged king, too old to carry ...

Matthew, this song is very beautiful and captures emotion, especially when you talk of 'stormy skies' I could imagne singing it and it works so well as a song rather ...

Matthew, the words you've used are very descriptive and paint a picture - the blood dripping - i think you coiuld perhaps further this for example describing the blood more ...

Matthew, This poem is different to your other one but makes the 'ice' reference and you use tis to a good advantage, maybe you should use it as a theme ...

Matthew, This poem is oozing with obvious deep thought. You've taken into consideration a lot of little details, I generally enjoyed reading it and considered what it could be about. ...

Hey, I really liked this poem, it created an image and i felt it was planned out very well. I really like poetry that talks of angles and heavenly images. ...

Hello :) I thought this poem was extremely well planned and thought out. It was extremely descriptive and i really enjoyed reading it. Hope this helps - if you need ...

Hi, I really enjoyed this poem. The imagery used it very detailed. The one criticism i have is that i think this poem would work better if the poem had ...

I thought this poem was really clever, it created a tone of what is to come in life - as you said - a decent wage etc. Your work is ...

hey, i really liked your poem it's easy to relate to. :) i thought it was really thoughtful and sweet. If you need me to review any more of your ...

Hi, I really liked this piece because of the description, it really painted a picture and it helped me visualize things like the having very little left of the stomach. ...

Hi, I thought your poem was very deep and meaningful. It was so easy to read but it really interested me and made me want to keep reading. I think ...

Hi, I really liked your poem because it had a good use of description, especially when you describe the blood as 'froth' - i thought that was very clever. :) ...

Hi, I really liked your poem but i have one criticism. I'm not sure if you are or aren't intentionally rhyming the lines but in some parts it fits quite ...

Hi, I really liked your poem because it really painted a vivid picture along with a gripping end, the reader realises that the Vultures have attacked and it really sends ...