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  • Other Poetry Re: An Adventurer's Faith

    Hermano! Hahaha! I don't know how I missed that one. xD Thanks, wabbit! ^_^

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: An Adventurer's Faith

    Thanks for the reviews everyone. So this poem means a lot to me, personally. And I thought I'd translated cause everything seems mysterious.Hahah. "I'm not from 'here', neither from 'there'." ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: An Adventurer's Faith

    Okay, this all started writing an 'about me'. xD P.S. A friend choose the title. ;) Lol. I'm not from 'here', neither from 'there'. What they call roads is not ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Aurora

    Hi there, CharifKhedr. First off, I wanna welcome you to YWS! Remember that if you have any questions you can always ask me. Okay, let's get to reviewing... ^_^ Your ...

    Jul 16, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [6]

    D: Banned for banning me for that.

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [6]

    Banned 'cause the only thing we have in common is that we love Italy. xD Lol.

    Jul 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: You Found Me

    Hi guys. As you may probably know (if you actually know me, Lol) I'm a strong Christian. xD And well, I had a dream with this Main Character and random ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: God's Love

    Hi there, Zwinky. Nice poem, I like it very much. I have some nitpicks for you. :) Its never ending, it's always there, Add an apostrophe: It ' s never ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Society

    Hi there, System. First off, welcome to YWS. Wow, I really love this poem. It has some punctuation problems, but it can be corrected. I love the idea you're bringing! ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Break that Fall {Chapter4}*edited*

    Hi Drama. Here to review as requested. As always I have more nitpicks than anything, but I think you should write about the place where they are at. Use more ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Was Wrong

    Hahaha... Hi RebelAnger. I gotta say this poem has a weak start, the opening stanza is kind of cliché. But when I kept on reading, I just loved it! xD ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Molly McCoys

    Hahahahhaha! Moimow, this is so funny! xD Lol. Good stuff! Something that I would suggest is to write the numbers in letters. And also to place commas, cause you wrote ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I am always with you.

    Wow, Nate this poem is awesome. I totally love it! :O It's deep and the ending is just shocking. And the rhymes, it was so good and catchy. I bet ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Ambivalence

    Thanks you, guys! ^_^

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Ambivalence

    "I fear absolutely nothing but fears!" That distance they talked about, it felt so close that night. I had feared my fears for so long, but ambivalence conquered my heart. ...

    Jun 20, 2011


Blessed is the man who, having nothing to say, abstains from giving us wordy evidence of the fact.
— George Eliot