GenShawklan

Wow! Thanks guys! :) I'm glad you like it! I'm finishing up the last few paragraphs of chapter two as we speak so I should be uploading it in just ...

All I Know of Hate Chapter One When I picture paradise, the first thing that comes to mind is birds. They flit from tree to tree, glinting red as ripe ...

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Hey! :) I'm Gen, and I'll be reviewing today. ^-^ I must say, I quite quite liked this. :) Your emotions were so raw and so real I felt everything ...

Hi Kyllorac! :) Could you please review When the Sand Runs Out for me? Thanks so much!

Thanks so much for the reviews guys! :) I'm going to re-work a lot of stuff in this chapter tonight and I agree with what you said about info dumping. ...

Aha, my first short story! :) I'm generally a novel person; my plots are always far too complex to make good short stories, and they're normally far too long. I ...

Hello Nyx! I'm GenShawklan and I'll be reviewing your story today. :) Just a few nitpicks (red is errors, green is suggestions): It was a gloriously sunny day. Bright rays ...

And here are some of my edited pics: A Thoroughbred at Keeneland Race Track in Lexington, KY One of my favorite dogs - Cloie, an Aussie. I really like this ...

Thanks so much guys! I'm glad you all like it. :) ** By the way I'm uploading more pics as we speak. :)

I really really really like this just the way it is! :) I especially like how it's a close-up on just one section of the ornament, but you can see ...

Hello! :) I was wondering if you could review the first chapter of my story, When the Sand Runs Out ? Thanks so much!

Hello! :) I really like this photo. There were just a few ways I thought it could be improved: 1. I think it would look neater if you cropped it ...

This is the first time I've uploaded my photography here, I hope you guys like it! :) I may be uploading a lot more pics in the next few days.

The full thing is finally here!! YAY! Sorry it's so long. :shock: I really want some BRUTALLY HONEST critiques, please! If you like it, tell me why. If you hate ...