Geoff_23

Though I do not have any suggestions or errors to point out, I would just like to say well done! The narration is raw and bold, regardless of what emotions ...

I work at Subway and while I was reading this, I noticed a hint of familiar emotions towards rude customers. hehe

I thought this was good. I loved the irony at the end. However, I think it could have a little more inserted into the last stanza to smooth over the ...

I would just like to say that overall, I found this poem very amusing. I may not fully understand the universal theme, but it made me think and look beyond ...