Ghostwriter

Rodney Shepard. Vampire hunter.

Can someone bring my character in...this thing is going so fast that it will chop me up if I jump in.

Let's not be placed on earth, I'm tired of it. And no special human...we already did that with Viola!

Tex felt the mouse under him and he shivered in revolt. " Where are we riding?"

How about this? God of emotions: The god of Terror. It's set in Heaven, two years after the events of this storybooks. And the god's are bored out of their ...

Where is it sett?

The lobby was empty except for the lounging hire a cops. The Teenager went through the metal dectector and was pulled over. " What kind of kid would want to ...

Name: Rodney Shepard Age: 16 Race: Vampire hunter Appearance: Small, flexable, Blacked smoothed out hair, always wear's dark blue clothes. Red eyes. How they act: Sneaky, Crafty, Often misleading peop

We might discuss what the new thread will be about. It will retain all the characters that's for certain. It can take place in a diffrient location. And we must ...

....a new thread?

Tex looked at them all Transport up to the sky above...and he felt left out. " Hello?" Entry then made a grab for Tex with the sacrifice knife! " AH!" ...

This is a pretty good idea and story beginning. But you revealed too much too soon...the reader will feel kind of like they had been flooded! Just make a steam ...

*not to be a jerk but...Daston is with Tex, You can intruduce yourself soon. But that's just my opinion.*

" Just sit on her while she will follow." The boy said and went out of a hole. Tex looked down at flint and puffed out his cheeks." Little man ...

Tex looked at the girl with Disgust. Who said that Texa's had a 'look'? He straighten his tie. " name is Mr. Thomas. Nothing more, nothing less." The girl gave ...