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Re: The Hotel Royal
2006, Atlantis Hotel. Tex brushed his hair back and looked at the people in the lobby. " It sure it crowded today." " I'll say..." The lobby boy said and ...
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Re: The Hotel Royal
* I'm just going to write a short section, this is not the start of the storybook* 2004, Atlantis Hotel. The guest's tapped the bell. They looked around at the ...
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Re: God of Emotions DT
Let's get this over with quickly....or we can't get any more people to join due to it being too fast paced and confusing.
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Re: The Hotel Royal
It's nice and good...but whats the plot again? And where is the hotel located Name: Tex Thomas Age: 24 Ocupation: Manager Appearance: Brown hair with Tan skin. Always Wear's a ...
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Re: Chat Games!
Tex looked at 'flint' with a cocked eye. She looked back. " Great...mouse rider. The dream job of a lifetime." He touched it and it didn't even flinch. he slowly ...
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Re: Power Seekers
Jackson looked at the cafe and realized he needed some coffie. He was about to walk in when he saw that their were a couple of demons in there...shit. Jackson ...
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Re: Chat Games!
Tex looked at the kid with confusion. " Wait...hold on...time out...You are a mouse rider?" The kid nodded. " And...you have been this size for how long...?" " Alll my ...
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Re: Little Raven Black
It really is quite good. I think there's a deeper meaning to this and it showed. I can't say anything bad about it. It's better then a couple of poems ...
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Re: The Journey chapter 1
Jason ‘J’ Barth was not happy. He should be. It was late November, winter break only a few weeks away, he should be happy…except he wasn’t. He looked down at ...
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Re: Surprise
Okay, I did a quick scan through it and I understand why you got a C on it. You should have gotten a B- for effort. The beginning was a ...
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Re: The Monster
I Do like it and the story is short and sweet. But simply it's the fact that you keep mentioning the sheep in anyway...you sound a bit tired then, Almost ...
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Re: Power Seekers
Jackson walked to a phone booth and pushed the numbers 666. It was almost imeitly awsnered. " Yes?" A silvery voice said over the phone. " Why the hell did ...
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Re: Time
John walked across the bank and went over the counter. He entered the vault while it was open and putted twenty thousand into a bag. John then saw, through the ...
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Re: Power Seekers
Jackson fled down the stairs and quickly entered the lobby. " JUST GIVE UP JACKSON!" He looked behind him to see three demons just coming down the stairs. They all ...
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Re: Chat Games!
Tex looked slowly around and saw that everything was bigger then him...everything! even his left shoe which he tripped on was the size of a mini van! " What...the hell....happened?" ...
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