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Re: My life in a boarding school
I Got another Male it just me or a lot writer's online are girl's? Name: Henry Walt's Occuptation: Student/ prank's our us Age: 14 Appearance: Messy Black hair, Black Jacket ...
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: Life in the streets!
Adam heard all of it and realised that these aren't assasins...their the Japan gang. " Great..." Adam groaned and opened the curtain a crack. He saw that the room was ...
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: Life in the streets!
Adam stood by the bed of Mr. Uhorou and then his cell phone rang. Adam took it out of his backpocket and saw it was a call from his big ...
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: My life in a boarding school
I Guess you may say that I'm new to this and will be a little broad here. Your character is joining a boarding school that harbor's student's ranging from 12 ...
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Life in the streets!
" Hey doc...He's going to be okay?" The docter nodded her head." Your very lucky to have got here only 2 minutes when it happened. it's not digged in too ...
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Life in the streets!
" Why couldn't The leader of the Japanese get shot on Monday?" Adam groan's as he parks the almost ruined car in the hospital parking lot. " Don't they call ...
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Life in the streets!
name: Alam grant Gang: Inc. Age: 16 Appeance: Light brown hair, Dark sunglasses that he never takes off. Has a thing for Hawwian shirts but no shorts. Normal body weight. ...
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Takeover Account 1 part 3
Running away from them was pretty easy. But I couldn’t find the underground anywhere… And their catching up. TAKEOVER I ran up the stairs and on the roof. I looked ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment
Now that's a prolouge! You added a lot of mystery to it and didn't reveal who Mrs. Paige is...or what she doe's. But you showed her as a cold blooded ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Coffee
I can say...well, I don't know what to say. You wrote a song that I can't tell wether or not your writing about showing pity to the young man, Showing ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Traveler
It really doe's put a image in your mind, and it's grammer is well. It show's that you really worked on this. I think that many would say that this ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Takeover Account 1 part 2
I Don’t know what happened after that. I guess you can say that I turned into one of them. I spend all that time while being one of them sleeping. ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: The takeover Account one
Who said the character, the story, were dead?
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: A l o n e
I have to say that I was humming a tune and I suddenly found this peom and it really gone well with it. I have to say it is a ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: The takeover Account one
I was use to sliding through life, ever see those kids that just sit there staring at something when they should be doing something? That was me. I was also ...
Feb 26, 2008
