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Re: sweet slumber
I love how you made such a meaningful poem out of something so simple. I have no corrections to make, and I'm pretty sure I'm the most critcy person you'll ...
Feb 12, 2019 -
Re: A Million Times and A Trillion More
Katness, I think it's great that you're writing about the unconditional love of God. This is exactly what I need right now. It's funny how God brings it to you ...
Feb 12, 2019 -
Re: The Sacrifice of Beauty
Hey, Mechasvi969, I think you did an overall great job on this story. Not to sound like a critic, but you did get a tad bit off course with your ...
Feb 12, 2019 -
Re: The True Story of Cinderella
I loved your twist!!! I think you did a great job conveying the evil queen's evilness. You also added some really cute jokes in there as well. "Once upon a ...
Feb 12, 2019 -
Re: Being Female
You did an AMAZING JOB!!!! Being a girl who's experienced the very tough issues you discussed, you conveyed my feelings perfectly. I think it was better without the stanzas, because ...
Feb 12, 2019