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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Trampling On Your Own Dreams

    A bit reminiscent of a hagiography. On ANOTHER note, this prologue is neither gripping nor poignant--in fact, its telling us that we 'will' cry, and 'want to help me' actually ...

    Aug 21, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The dead of night

    Hello, ladypurple. You made a pretty and unique comparison with rain to dancers. I really like how the second paragraph reads. That said, the first paragraph seems a bit...clashing. I ...

    Jun 15, 2010


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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