Gilthanas

i felt that this was a good piece of literature, and as all things are, there is room for improvement. most of the suggestions have already been made, and all ...

magnificent work, very well composed. you successfully made it clear that they were passionate about each other through very modest action, a skill that is not very common. all critiques ...

my knees became weak from the sense that my protection is now gone forever this was a magnificent poem, i really feel for you my friend. my only suggestion is ...

I can still hear the thunder, roaring from your lips. And I can still feel the lightning, striking in your fists. this poem was fantastic, i really enjoyed it. though ...