GingerLizzy

Granted, but you play them badly I wish I had great artistic abilities

Granted, but you press to hard with your pen and carve into your skin, getting a nasty infection that turns to gangrene, resulting in you having your limbs removed. I ...

Granted but you get ink poisoning I wish I didn't live where I do

Granted, but she's so perfect, that you get no attention. I wish I could rollerblade

These are very good and I am jealous Your detail is very good and you even draw in the smallest, which is always good. Well done.

Granted, but it comes too soon and messes up the whole, seasonal routine. I wish I could make everyone laugh, with ease

Not bad. Not bad. I liked it, but I didn't love it - although I have no words as to why I think it could be better. Sorry I am ...

Well, for a first attempt, I liked this. Although the eyes are a little out of proportion to the actual face/head but I liked it any way. Good work.

I'd say I was thick skinned [like everyone is telling me to be] when it comes to critiques that inform me that; yes, this piece of work was terrible I ...

If this was a cake, I'd say yummy. It worked well and I thought that all of these little poems were a wonderful idea, instead of squishing the whole solar ...

I have nothing much to say really. [echoes most of the things that have been outlined by Myth] I enjoyed reading this and thought that the idea was strange, but ...

Not bad, I liked the depth of it and for once, I understood a poem that had depth to it. That's a change. I liked the structure and your punctuation ...

Awwh, pretty sad but nice too. It's really sweet and you use good imagary to portray the boy's feelings. Some parts flowed wonderfully, although in other, I just couldn't feel ...

[Ha, I just have to post again] Granted, but then they all fall out. I wish the moon was made of cheese.

Granted but you soon get be-headed for pretending to be a ginger. You traitor. I wish my hair wasn't like a ginger afro.