GingerLizzy

Okay, hi. ^^ I liked this, the idea behind it was really meaningful and you put across the point nicely, but I agree with Via when she says that it ...

Hm, this was okay actually. I think it could do with a little bit of a re-vamp and inprovement because in some lines, it seemed to stutter and be a ...

Hm, I found the first one rather difficult to deal with; but I think this is just 'cause I'm slow. The second line in it stumped me with the wording ...

Contest reward review number two; This was very clever, and so ironic! I'd absolutely hate if that happened to me, although I can say that I have never been in ...

Okai, contest rewarded review number one; I liked this, but I have to say, it wasn't my usual style of thing to read. I found it to be a little ...

Phew, that is one sexually filled story; it was really good! I just read all six parts and can I just say, bravo dear. You added a lot of emotion ...

Hm, welcome to YWS; you're pretty new, right? Okai, I liked your first two stanzas the most, as they seem to mantain some sort of rhyhtm and rhyme, but as ...

Reetio, contest review number two; Right, I liked the idea and story behind the poem, but I have to admit, I wasn't so keen on the rhyming scheme for such ...

Okai, this is number one of your chosen contest reviews; I liked this, it had a different rhythm to what I normally read and it stumped me a little, but ...

My Dad really loves this book; I had a flick through it once but to be honest, it didn't catch my attentions like I thought it would. I love the ...

Hm, okay then first off, Welcome to YWS! May I point out that there is a rule for the amount of reviews that you must make for each literary post. ...

Hm, I quite liked this actually; you used some powerful imagery. Stanza five, line two; "Leaving the trail of homesickness". Hm, this caught me a little and made me read ...

I'm not on the whole love poem scene; makes me want to tear my hair out. This... wasn't great but it wasn't terrible. So, it was inbetween. You used a ...

Whoa, I agree profusely until I go blue in the face that you arrange this poem. Not only does it make your work look unprofessional and jumbled, but it kind ...

Hm, this was nice. I can't really think of anything else to say; it was a good poem but it wasn't something that really captured me and made me think, ...