Girl_in_pink

Last night was repetitive. But i loved it even more. good luck and great thinking.

There were two typo's but never mind. i'm not great at grammer either. but keep it up.

The last 2 lines were Hottie. Keep up ur great work.

No doubt, it was hott. keep it up-loved the idea.

Huh? back again i see "Do you love it?! I soooo Doooo!

I thought it was great at the beggining but i became weird. Though i loved it! keep it up, hope i was helpful

Yah

I gave that nasty fruit To my enemy I left it in a boot And told it to chimney. This was the bit i really liked, although i must say ...

I did love it y'all

I'm not really sure what i think of this poem. I wasn't bad but it wasn't great. Sorry to seem harsh, but its the reality. You ramble about mushrooms? But ...

I really like what you tried to do here. My poetry isn't as good either but. I think u should make it a little longer and maybe even put a ...

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Your beautiful N?A

Hey great huh?

I once had a friend, who all ways told me the truth. I once had a friend who, looked deep into my eyes. I once had a friend who wore ...