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Re: In The Line Of Fire (removed from story)
Good story- can't wait for more. ^_^ You've done well with all the technical stuff so far, but one thing that tends to bug me (personally) is run-on sentences- one ...
Dec 14, 2007
Good story- can't wait for more. ^_^ You've done well with all the technical stuff so far, but one thing that tends to bug me (personally) is run-on sentences- one ...
Dec 14, 2007
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