Gladius

Alright, I'm not 100% pleased with it, but (so far) it's all I've got. T_T *glares at writer's block and sighs* Oh well. And the chapter's not named either...I'm toying ...

Oh gosh I've left this unattended for WAY WAY WAY too long. X_X XD Ah, well. :razz: I've FINALLY gotten past writer's block!!!!!!! HURRAY!! *trumpet fanfare, streamers fall down, and ...

I KNOW the speech is not finished! I'm just trying to give you some advice for when you edit it. T_T

I had to do this critique at school (yes, I printed it out and everything) O.o Wow...I'm lucky to have an editor as dedicated as you. ^_^ *hugs* I really ...

Ok, I've decided I'm going to but up the rest of what I have for Chapter 6. I'm thinking the next few chapters, since they're kinda transition chapters, are going ...

Overall, it was a nice continuation. ^^ I honestly don't remember much and should go back and review. :oops: There's really no other comments 'cause you do such a good ...

Ok, I finally got the first half of Dragon-oath finished. I'm going to post it for you to enjoy while I slave over the second half. XD I think this ...

I love it that people like you can take a classic well known game with an established plot and charcaters and then turn it into your own. Thank you. The ...

[quote=Gwenevire]You like it? Or are you just saying that?[/quote] Yes, I like it! I don't say I like something if I don't like it. :D When you do get the ...

Interesting--it appears as if it's going to become a romance. It's needs a little bit more flesh, though... *cocks head and contemplates story thoughtfully* The dialogue's a little awkward, too...but ...

Ugh, sorry guys, but I've hit some major writer's block!! I'm introducing a few new characters, so it's a bit of a doozy working in the things that need to ...

Yay! Poor Link! XD When I was writing this, I had a friend of mine say almost the same thing. Glad to hear I can keep a reader on edge. ...

All right, sorry for the long break. Consider this a -late- New Year's chap ;) Enjoy! ******************** Chapter 5: Imprisonment The cold wind whipped through his light tunic and cloak ...

The only major problem i can perceive insofar is punctuation. So true, Morrow! However, I hope you read Jabber and Tamora's posts about these same things before you edited. ;) ...

O.o Oh, my gosh! So much to respond to! :thud: XD Well, here goes: If- if- if… I'd get rid of this. Maybe if she was actually talking, it would ...