Glimmerglass

Hi, there. I really enjoyed this piece, as it was an excellent account of a funeral. About six months ago, I went to the funeral of a little girl I ...

Hi, Crimsona! Hey, for a first poem, this is very good. I like that I can feel what you're trying to express in this poem; that's sometimes difficult to accomplish. ...

Hi, there! Welcome to YWS! I really enjoyed this poem. It's powerful and well-written and poignant. I loved that there was a rhyme, but I noticed that it wasn't particularly ...

Hi, Maroono! Welcome to YWS! So, I liked the beginning of this story. It's fast-paced and interesting and vivid. The fact that it is written from a wolf's point of ...

Hi, there. :) First off, I like the statement you're making in this poem; it's a bit injured and defiant and angry, as if the narrator is finally tired of ...

Hi, Jagged. :) My first thought on this poem was that it reminded me of that old myth about the sculptor who creates a statue so immensely beautiful that he ...

Hi! Wow, this is really interesting. I'm curious about the back story and especially Annette's identity. Are she and Selene the same person? Twins? Is it a nickname? Your writing ...

Hi, DrowningInDarkness! So, when I read this, I was immediately intrigued. You describe enough of the scenario to make the reader interested, and yet leave much unsaid, so that the ...

Hi! I really enjoyed the language you used in your poem. The first stanza sets a vivid scene in my mind, and, true to your title, it is a description ...

Hi! What I liked especially about this poem was the coherency. I could really understand what the poem was addressing, and thus it was emotionally effective. This line in particular ...

Hi, there. You have a very interesting poem here: it's nice and regular with stanzas of four lines. I felt like you were aiming for an aabb rhyming pattern, but ...

Wow. This is an absolutely gorgeous poem. The language was lovely, especially fitting for the content of the piece. I thought you started it off very well; the simple statement ...

Hi! I really liked how your poem flowed. The word choice, line breaks, and general movement reminded me of a performance in a grand hall. :D The only part that ...

Hi, there. Let me be the first to review! I liked your description here. The imagery is quite vivid, and you've got a good handle on what you are portraying. ...

Hi! I really enjoyed the tone you have in this poem: it's wistful and heartfelt, which gives it believability. My general impression is that the someone you're addressing here represents ...