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Oh.. hey, Romeyo, I didnt notice that before... thanks!

thank you both, anyone up for some hardcore poetry analysis? ~Travis

there ya go, fixed and re-edited version. better than before

I apologize, but something seems to be wrong with it... or maybe i'm just computer illiterate, but i cant get the line breaks to work, so I underlined the last ...

thanks for the reviews yeah, I did make a couple changes, if its still too vague, dont know what to tell you. just to say, Abby, you haven't read much ...

Are You?

Absolutely dear, this is the first thing of mine you have ever asked for. I feel honored.

Thanks P!NK, I appreciate it. and I've never read the "Grapes Of Wrath"

of course, no 14 year old writes a book that is completely cheesy,

you know, I thought maybe not to comment on your blatant ignorance but after re-reading your review I felt I MUST say SOMETHING. so we will start from the top, ...

true true, I did not ask what we would do, I asked how would we be remembered. The "Glow-In-The-Dark" asking if we will be remembered at all. if there will ...

mwahahaha, well, I meant the threat of Nuclear Armageddon, "Glow-In-The-Dark" what did you think I meant?

ummm.. lighter bit at the end? I think you misunderstood "Glow-In-The-Dark" well, I suppose if you mean "lighter" in a literal sense.

don't be sorry, just roll with it, its all good. we should talk sometime, if you really feel that way about the world.

but my friend, I see no reason for it to be a poem, everything is but what it is, and well, you may have written it like that, but I ...