GoldFlame

What's the point of the nerve-controlling? Why will the main character know little about this? If you have to limit the MC's knowledge, then I'd suggest jumping to another person's ...

(Some thoughts I'd like to add...) Best advice any new writer can get: Don't think. Just do it. What's the definition of a rough draft? A piece with bumps you ...

For joy, I suppose. To pass the time.

How much have you developed your plot and characters? Map out your main character; make it so you know him/her better than you know anyone in real life. Personality, pet ...

Writer's block. It's my worst enemy. I'm never motivated enough after a few chapters to keep writing. Sure, I love planning out novel plots, especially fantasy ones, but when it ...

Not going to go into specifics here, but the most difficult criticism is on the plot of your novel. It's useful criticism, yes, but then you're forced to re-shape your ...