GrandmaMuffin

So what happens next? :) Can't wait for the next chapter - GRANDMAMUFFIN ] -

I thought that was sensational! I couldn't have thought of something like that in a million years. I didn't find anything wrong with it so no nitpicks. So keep being ...

That was funny :D especially the food fight part. This needs another chapter. Unless you already made one. I didn't see anything wrong with it so no nitpicks. I'm not ...

Hello person. :) Lets get down to business. . . I thought that was awesome! I couldn't find anything wrong with it so no nitpicks. Yayaz :B

Something wet and fuzzy was on my forehead. Gross. I couldn't find the rest of my body, but it was here somewhere. I just had to keep looking. But I ...

LUV IT

Next thing I knew, I was on the ground, cheek scraped against the pavement. Lauren was staring down at me with absolute horror written all over her face. Don't just ...

The stars were beautiful That night So lovely So bright And so was she That night So vivid So white Why did I fright? That night So luminous So bright ...

Wowza. I wish I could draw manga people that nice. And his clothes arn't that crooked. :) Ya you could work with the shading a bit more. I particularly liked ...

You sooooo much better than me at writing. That gives me motivation to write my third chapter. :) hopefully it won't suck too bad.

thanks ppl. :) ya I didn't like this chapter as much as the first either and I'm still working on the third. Iv actually written all the way up to ...

This story was like so awesome. The beginning almost made me cry :( but the ending made me happy :) I found a few spelling mistakes. NITPICKS: So he sat ...

"So Lauren, who are you going to the dance with?" I glanced up from my tray of muck. It had been manager's choice that day, but it was the exact ...

it was amazical. :D I love making up words don't you?

Hey :) this was a good, short poem and was enjoyable. Now, I am not too great at grammar, nor have I ever written a poem I was proud of ...