GrandmaMuffin

This was really good :) a good thing about the story is you have many different emotions when you read it. curiosity-there's something in his pocket, what is it? why ...

Yes the writing was a little repetitive, but good word choice all the same :) The lyrics were nice. Feels like our hearts are under attack. Keep it safe and ...

It started at lunchtime on the 13th of February in McArthure Junior High's crowded lunchroom. Mathew Portz, his girlfriend, and I made our way to the lonely table in the ...

this poem was awesome and really deep. I really liked the beginning. good use of words :) keep up the good work

What everyone else in front of me said.

Ya i suck at grammar and all that. :P

awe SOME

I though it was funny and i agree with everyone else who commented:)

wow.

is it that dude from twilight?

is it somebody famous? its really good though! :)

"Ah, you're here!" A familiar face appeared behind the doorway. "Took you long enough!" "Mathew! Don't be rude!" his mother scolded. "Let them in!" We were led into the warm ...

i liked it :) i liked the begininng bestest. you used a few words i didnt know so thats good. :) keep up good work.

I thought this story was awesome :) it was so dramatic and dark. You described stuff really well. Just wow. Im not really an expert on this subject though. But ...