GreatEscape

Okay I changed the first paragraph and the beginning of the second quite a bit. Please reread and let me know what you think!

Okay I did some editing. Some things I left the same though. Thanks for all you're reviews they were really helpful. Nixon: I know it's a bit unrealistic but I ...

That does help! I thought that it might be that way at first but I wasn't sure.

Thanks you guys for reviewing! Reviews are still welcome by the way. I edited and fixed all the embarrassing mistakes I made. And yes I will PM you you I ...

Thank you both for your reviews! Karsten: I did not mean for her to come off as conceited. Her saying that no human could compare to her was meant just ...

Don't worry we all have our own style! I never proofread anything.

Great installment. This really isn't a review. I didn't spot anything that I found odd or wrong. I just wanted to let you know this piece was good. It was ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I found it relatable and I think it does a good job of describing how a person in this situation feels. I also thought the ...

Thanks for all the opinions and critiques! I do plan to add chapters to this story because I think it's one of my most original ideas. I'll edit some of ...

Thank you all for your reviews! Stoney: I think I do like it better with five lines in each stanza. I wrote the poem because I feel completely overwhelmed by ...

1962 in a small colony in America My only criticism is that I think the time period is wrong. I think you might want to go a little further back. ...

The regular vampires looked to the royal vampires as a human would their president. Only two royal vampires were allowed to be Awake at one time. It was usually a ...

He's not because even though he thinks she beyond beautiful he still hates vampires.

It is a love story but that's not the plot at all. I was going in the unrequited love direction. I know what you mean about the Underworld thing though. ...