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  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Cry For Help

    Okay well, quite simply, I am really bit sure whether u intended this to be an actual cry for help or an actual work. I'm really at quite a loss....but ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A fire's dance.

    Hi there! :D I'm so psyched that u reviewed my story! Thanks a lot. Now we're even XD. *clears throat* I think you did a very good job with this ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 1-1)

    Woah! That was very cool! :D I really like your idea of a new take on a post-apocalyptic re-genesis if you will. You seem to have a very descriptive style ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Type.

    Wooh! Great job on your first poem! Glad to give you your first poetry review! First off, I really liked the idea of this poem here. Writing about a page's ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: I Want

    I like it. :) Short and sweet. Review for ya. *Clears Throat* The awesome thing about poetry is that it's kind of like modern art. It can take whatever shape ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Beginning

    Hi there. Review for you! :D First, I really liked this narrative and I like the way it was laid out. Rather than being just a flat narration where the ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Humor Re: The Soul Collector

    LMAO. This is amazing. Review for you. Okay, first of all, this story is really well thought out and also very intriguing at the same time. I felt like what ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Why I believe in God.

    Hi there. This isn't a review really, but I'm certainly up for religious debate (bring on the chaos XD.) First off is like to say that I come from a ...

    Jan 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Invasion of Chocolate

    Hey there! Review for ya. LMaO. First off, this made me laugh...a it definitely did what a funny piece is supposed to do. Good job with this. It's interesting, I've ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: A Change in my Heart

    Hi there. Review for you! Reppin Team Paint the Roses Red! I really like the way this poem is written. It's really simple, but it still carries a lot of ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Phoenix (Prologue)

    Hi there. Review for ya. Let's go Paint the Roses Red!!!! :D *Clears throat* As it's already been said, this is a very nice introduction to a larger story or ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: A house burns down from the POV of the fire.

    Wooh! Great concept here. I love the way you personified the fire and really made "him" into a believable character with believable emotions. Well done there! I also liked the ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: Crayon Heartbeats

    Hi! Review for ya Madame Pompadour. (Is that who your named after??) First off, I won't be reviewing based on anything grammatical of spelling related, because I think the writers ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: deleted

    Hi there! Review for ya! First off, I've gotta let ya know; I won't be reviewing this or any sort of grammatical and/or spelling things just cause I believe that ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Untitled

    Hi. Review for ya. I really liked what you were trying to say with this poem, and I think you got your message across very well. I'm not gonna nitpick ...

    Dec 30, 2013


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