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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Color of Pain

    Hey there. I'm new to dis...but here's a review! Haikus are awesome. They are always really short. But they pack a punch. (yes these first three sentences are a haiku ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Silver Night

    Hey there. Review for ya. I absolutely love this poem. Fantastic job with the descriptive wording and figurative language. I especially like your line: "Silver beams of frozen moonlight kiss ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Requiem of an Immortal Soul

    Whatsup! Im new to this site, but imma try my hand at a review for ya. I like the way that this poem is executed, and I like your descriptions ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: I Wanted

    Hiya! Review for ya! I like this, and think it's very creative, the reason being that we all experience writer's block, and everyone on this site can probably relate to ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dreamer and dreams.

    Woah. Nice little poem. I like the way you descirbed dreams as sort of a paradox in the last four lines. I also like how you turned a dream into ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why Our Hands Are Always Clean

    Wow! I really like this. I love the way the words seemed to dance around a bit, and I loved the way you kind of told a story with each ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Proudly Psychopathic

    Wow. Okay. Nice. I like the way that you put us into the mind of the psychopath, and let the atmosphere take hold. It's always very refreshing to read a ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: She Felt Cold

    Wooo! I liked this one a lot. I like the way you described all of those....dead things. Very good choice of adjectives, especially when describing the dead Emma vs. the ...

    Aug 26, 2013


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