Gryffindor13

I loved it! It was really creative! Really, really good job! There really isn't much to critique that others haven't so all I have to say is: WHAT A GREAT ...

This is really good! I can't wait to read more! You make the characters feel real. By just reading the story, you feel connected to the characters. You feel the ...

Wow. Good job! This story is fast-paced and moving. At the end you really want her to go downstairs and talk to her father, you're almost willing her to go. ...

So very interesting! I can't wait to read more! I want to know where Starry Hill is and why it will help Kim figure out what to do. I really ...

Intriguing....The very last paragraph made me want to read more of this story, a lot more! Very well done! There are a couple of things I would like to touch ...

Wow. That was a truly moving story. I felt like I was right in the crowd, listening to the story being told, not reading it. It's amazing. There really isn't ...

This was so funny! I loved it! The only critique I have was that at point you spelt Hermione's name wrong. That's it, just a simple mistake....Please do the rest ...

Thanks for all the welcomes! :) Tigersprite: I loved the last movie! It made me cry (that's always the sign of a good movie :wink: ) I hope to do ...

I thought this was really funny! I really liked it. You've liked much more interesting guys than I have (but that could be a result of being older...but whatever) My ...

Very nicley done! I don't have anything bad to say. I loved it!

Hi! So I'm what you'd consider new. :D I just joined today and I'm saying hi to all the newbies (and not-so-newbies). I'm super outgoing so never be afraid to ...

I like peotry, but occasionally I find it confusing or unrelatable. Not yours. Your poem came across strong and beautiful. The last three lines "I'm me, I'm just, Solitary" really ...

This was really good! The character's emotions were so real, I felt like they were my own. You are really talented, especially with conveying emotion, which I find hard to ...