Guardian

Sorry, this was some glitch

Thanks for the "nit-picky" comments! They actually helped... And I'll be sure to make the right changes :)

I want to thank you for your honesty! You really made me see my shortcomings, so thank you :)

I want to thank you for your honesty! You really made me see my shortcomings, so thank you :)

I cannot express my gratitude! Thanks for pointing this all out! I will get on to fixing all of that right away!

Thank you so much! I think I'll keep those suggestions of yours in mind!

Why did this get sent twice? Wth

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Guardian speaking-- I just want to start off by saying that this is the most abstract piece of writing that I have ever read or reviewed. I'll try my best ...

If you want to read on, I posted the second chapter!

The second chapter is now up!

Hi Ryu! I'm glad you enjoyed it! -The reason it's short is because it's supposed to introduce an ominous problem that won't be solved until much later in the story. ...

Yeah, I could do that. Is there any way you could share the chapters with me before you posted them? I think if you created a private forum of something, ...

Young adult novel indeed! Thanks for all the compliments! :)