Gully_Foyle

Hey all. Thanks for your ideas; they've been quite helpful. I admit that I am quite new to the diary-style of writing, and that it seems rather clumsy right now. ...

Hey all, I'm looking for any and all criticisms I can get. I especially want to know if the tone or format works for you guys. Quality Control “I long ...

An interesting hook to the story and I am excited to see where it goes. That being said, I do have a few criticisms. In most cases, you capitalized the ...