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Gwenevire

  • Script » General, General Re: What a Waste... (Removed)

    wow. That was very interesting. It drew me to it. I really like your ideas and how you put it all! Good job! :D I know that it is good. ...

    Nov 6, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Thomas Pinewood & The Grail Of Champions Piece

    Thomas began walking down Yorkshire Road when he suddenly noticed a very old lady trying to cross the street but have little success as the traffic was at it's peak ...

    Nov 2, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: It was so scary.....

    *Clap* Very nice! I really like it! *clap* One thing you say " Lip glossed lips " Lips...You should say something els for the second lips :P I really enjoyed ...

    Nov 1, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: .:Second Nature:.

    Wow! Everyone said all of it! :D All I have to say that your work was great! My one suggestion though is...You should end the last bit differently...I dono...something different. ...

    Oct 29, 2007


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
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