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Gymnast2801

I'm Gymnast2801 but you can just call me Gymnast!

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Luna part 2

    Hello again! Gymnast2801 here with another review! As before, I will correct while reading and then leave my final thoughts at the end. "So she shut out the sounds And ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Luna

    Hello there! Here with a review for Team Weasely! I will give my overall thought to your poem after I am done because I correct while I read :) Okay, ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Absence

    Hi there! Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Weasely! I know that this isn't what you would expect from the beginning of a review, but I will add my ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Epiphany

    Hello MilayNire! Gymnast2801 here with a review! I liked the poem, it was short but not quite as simple as someone would expect. I really only had two problems with ...

    May 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Prologue

    Hello KittyMew! Gymnast2801 here with a review! This poem was quite enjoyable and a bit mysterious. Although I liked this poem prologue, I found one two things you could work ...

    May 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Water

    Hello there! Gymnast2801 here with a review! This poem is very cool and unique! I like it! I also love the factor that you spelled out WATER! Because this was ...

    May 23, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: A Day in the Life of an Insecure Relationship

    Hello! Gymnast2801 here with a review! Woo hoo, this was awesome!! I've never read anything like this before in my life and quite frankly, I compleatly loved it! The character ...

    May 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: An Ocean Of Dreams

    Hello there, Gymnast2801 here with a review! Your poem was so wonderful that I can't even stand it!!! I loved it so much and the rhyming, word choice and especially ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Best Part Of Me

    Hi! Gymnast2801 here for a review! This was Avery interesting poem but overall it was good. There where a few errors so let's get to it! "My hand is big ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Echo

    Hello, Gymnast2801 stopping by for a review! I liked this poem and it was really well written! There when a few parts that weren't so clear...but overall, great job! Now ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Writer

    Hello, Gymanst2801 here with a review! I really liked this poem, it's short and simple but there where still a few things that could use some correction: "She sat with ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Free

    Hi, Gymnast2801 here with a review! I liked your poem, it told a very sad beginning for this person but the end turned out well. It reminds me of some ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: I Planted a Seed

    Hi, Gymnast2801 here with a review! First off, this poem is really good! I like how you referred to a garden as sort of the growing of the mind. I ...

    May 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Broken Home

    Hi! Gymnast2801 here for a review! I like your poem, it defiantly expresses the way the person is feeling. There where a couple grammar errors so I'll get onto that: ...

    May 2, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Walking Through the Forest

    Hi again! Gymanst2801 here for a review! First off, this is a really cool poem! I like how it's short but simple and somehow, it still seems to describe everything ...

    May 1, 2016


You can cut all the flowers, but you cannot stop Spring from coming.
— Pablo Neruda