Gymnast2801

Hi jessiebear, Gymnast2801 here with a review for the Reviewing Ravens! Okay, first off: what sort of writing is this supposed to be? I feel like it's a mixture of ...

Hi, Gymnast2801 here with a review for the Reviewing Ravwns! This story is really good and supper interesting to me. I like how the parts of your store flow so ...

Hey ChocolateChello! Gymnast2801 here with a review! 1. like a wildfire raging its way through my mucules its - it's 2. I don't know why I keep going going - ...

Hi, Gymnast2801 here for a review! This is an interesting poem and I really liked it because I've never read anything like it before. You turned a subject that is ...

Hi, Gymnast2801 here for a review! 1. All the world’s a stage, he said, I would say to add quotation marks before 'All' and after 'stage' 2. (In their story, ...

Hi! Very nice poem! There are a few thing that I would like to point out though: 1. When the sapphire water crashes into the water beneath it (comma after, ...

Hi! I like your poem NoStoryTime! However, I feel that there are some things we could make better so let's get started! First off, I'm not sure that "There is ...

Hey Eternity! I really liked this pice of work!! Of course, there are always just a few things to make a story better. Original: ...and surly they after just a ...

Nice poem! I like how you described the wolf and the word selection you used. However, there where one or two things I spotted that could be fixed: . 'Until ...

Can I just say: wow! This poem is truly amazing and so well written!! The first verse was my favorite just because it flowed so well. I can tell that ...

Hello, Gymnast2801 here to give your prologue a review! This story seems very interesting-and it's very cool that the main character is a dog! This prologue is really good but ...

Hi! I love Alice in Wonderland so I was curious about this story. First off, there where quite a few grammar errors but those can be fixed easily. Original: "Alex ...

This is a great poem. Umm...I'm not quite sure that there's anything to work on. If the ending rhymed then that would be a nice catch but that isn't really ...

Hi! I would first like to inform you that this prologue was very good and intriguing!! First off, what was with the other language? I don't know if it is ...

Hi! I just read your story and it was very good! I like Frezal a lot. Here are things to work on: Throughout the whole chapter you mainly focused on ...