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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Because I'm a Christian

    Looooooooooooooooooooooove this poem! It's absolutely inspiring and soul-touching! :D I'm a very observant and practicing Cristian, and I'm so so so glad to read this poem! It's so true, and ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Only for a moment

    Aww, it's sweet and adorable! I like it quite a lot :D Thanks for recommending this for me to review. Not let me get to the details... so let's hold ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Abyss

    I really like this poem. Very deep. You might even say, abyssal! haha, see what I did there? I especially like the dramatic irony of the title VS content. With ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Nightrise

    This is a very cryptic and mysterious poem. I think the language is used very well, and there's a lot of cool stuff here. Now, details then.... As others wait ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: One Shot. Calling All Critiques!!!!!

    Let me just say at first, we're all writers here on this site, and we don't need to be jabbing each other. I understand the title is a little irritating ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: vengeance (chapter three)

    Allow me to use your story in order to gain another 100-200 points for my team, haha! :D nah seriously, I'm looking forward to reviewing this though. I like this ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Therese and Isabelle

    Now this is something new! How refreshing to see a love poem that's about two girls, and not a boy and a girl. I mean, I love a classic love ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hi My Name Is

    Now this is truly something unique and original! I have never before read a depression story with depression as a character. Or any story with an emotion/sickness as a character ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Of Fire and Shadow

    Let me first say, I'm a Boy Scout, and as I was reading this, I could just envision us gathering around the fire, doing all our activities, comical and dramatic. ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Messages

    I think you have a really good poem here! What I like most about this is the chaotic blend of elements. Normally, I'd say this is all too much, but ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The path of the daffodils

    I do like this poem quite a bit! Daffodils are a very pretty flower, and a good subject for this poem. Now, contrary to the review above mine, I think ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The UnBible: The Old Testament: The Book of Genesis

    Hahaha, this is really fun! I enjoyed reading this, and it's a very fresh and new take on a classic story. I'm a very observant and practicing Catholic, and I ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Broken Glass Girl

    Hello again Spook! :D I went browsing through the forums, and I saw another poem by you, and I couldn't click it fast enough! haha. I really loved this poem, ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Teenage Emergency

    If it were possible to 'Like' this poem a million and six times, I'd sit here clicking that button ALL DAY! This is an absolutely inspired and amazing poem! I ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love Never Dies

    Hi there! First of all, welcome to YWS, and I hope you find everything here to your liking. The people are all pretty awesome, and there's lots of great things ...

    May 3, 2011


If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them.
— Henry David Thoreau, "Walden"