HJYoung

2 parts now, itll take a week or so, as i have school, np no need to do so.

Ok, as soon as i have time for more reviews, ill try to.

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Well, it usually comes from inspiration or just a flash of insight.

SF novel-to-be, plz help with dialogue

SF novel-to-be, plz help with dialogue

SF novel-in-progress, i need help on dialogue

Novel-in-progress SF 5000ish, but u dont have to read the Appendix

SF Novel, need feedback on everything, especially dialogue.

It's a in-progress novel. I think the thing i need to improve the most is my dialogue.