Haiimthomas

within a week! Just writing it now. Gotta get 200 points though so i best be reviewing others work! Thanks for being interested! Thomas

Thankyou very much!

Thankyou :) i shall keep doing as i did.

Thankyou very much for your review! I really appreciate you feedback and tips! I am writing the next part now, would you suggest anything regarding my writing style? Is it ...

thankyou ;)

Thank you very much! I really appreciated it and ill be sure to fix up the paragraphs, etc. I may as well ask if you found noticed any other problems ...