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Re: Look
Spinoza is a philosoper who identifies God to nature , I wanted to ryhme that's why I wrote fists instead of hands which I agree with you would have fit ...
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Re: Short Prologue and beginning of Chapter 1
Everyone told me that ( about the hunger games) but it doesn't turn out the same , I will soon publish the next pages of the first chapter hope you'll ...
Mar 13, 2013 -
Re: Look
Thank you so much !!! This is by far the most constructive critic of this poem I've had this far don't hesitate to review my work I would be much ...
Mar 13, 2013 -
Re: When the Lights Go Off
I love the all atmosphere you created , and I think the impression you describe using the light/darkness comparison is something we all felt at least once in our life. ...
Mar 13, 2013
