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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Black Lake

    Well first off, I really liked this. It provided nice imagery and it was genuinely enjoyable to read. I can't say that I know exactly what you intended the metaphor ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Words

    I liked your poem, it raises a good point. Not everyone can write a poem or a story, it's a talent. I thought you got your point across nicely despite ...

    Feb 17, 2011


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes