Halycon

This is an awesome poem. It flows really well which is something I struggle with and the images you use just fit together really well. no critiques. just awesome. Keep ...

Thank you all for your feedback. It is much apprieciated and I have slightly altered the poem in accordance with it.

Thanks for the review On the note about thrusting and cleaving I didn't literally mean cleaving someoene apart, more the lives of thier familes, friends etc. :)

Thanks for the feedback =]

Thank you for all the advice and reviews. I really appreciate it :)