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=D The first thing I notice was something my advanced creative writing professor has drilled into my class and that is that the use of your extra fluff is distracting ...

=D Back for more~ Phoebe Winston sat in the cusionless chair with her hands kept neatly in her lap and her spine erected severely. *cushionless But also... 'erected severely' is ...

I like this poem. It's profound and relevant! ^_^ Just one little nit-picky thing: believing it to be the rarest of all treasures? "Believing it to be" is, to me, ...

=D You get my 100th review! Yay for Nutty! =D I. Little Things I had been here before. Not only among the trees, with birdsong all around- but in my ...

^_^ I really like this poem! I read it through once and had to note it in my blog to be sure to come back and give it a proper ...

Hi, CBF! ^_^ It's been too long since I've popped in on one of your works, so I'm here now. ^_^ For a moment, the sun forms a perfect halo ...

Hey, Clo-luff! ^_^ -huggles- I. Small Things At the conclusion of the affairs, everything seemed too hazy to consider. I'm not really a fan of this sentence -- it's kind ...

^_^ Sorry I'm a bit late, but hopefully I can be of some help without repeating whatever anyone else has already said.

^_^ Here again~! -high fives- Jim threw himself into his work with every sinew and muscle and tendon. I know this is not /that/ important of an opening line, but ...

I was going to try to get this started when I was at school today, but the computer totally flipped out on me, so this is the first chance I've ...

Hi, there, Serendipity. ^_^ I was about to stop in and review this piece on my own anyways, so I'm glad you stopped by my review thread. I was also, ...

Here as requested! ^_^ Reading it through once, it's okay. It's pretty well-written, but it doesn't really have a lasting impression on me. =/ I think part of it results ...

Hehe, I'm finding my name more and more in older books! Jane Eyre AND Emma? =D Also in The Notebook. Hehehe. I like my name too, but not my last ...

;C Sorry I'm so late, love! Just, life, you know, stuff like that! ^_^ {Okay, so maybe it was really more like procrastination, but...} Hopefully I won't repeat much that ...

-shows up!- ^_^ Eurm, yeah, I'm following it. So, feel free to PM me when you put another part of it up, if ANY of my critiques have been helpful ...