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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Dark *Revised*

    Those questions are really powerful, and it's a lovely way to end this piece. I think this is a hard piece to tackle, whether or not this was a true ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Jolt

    And here we are, Dark, for your last review besides part 9 and 10~ I hope these have all been helpful for you. It's been fun getting to know your ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Splish, Splash

    Oh, hey, Dark! Here I am to review some of your POETRY, now. I'll get back to the last two pieces of your pokemon work a little later today. But ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Mechanical Jellyfish: A Year in Dreams (August)

    Hey there, BadNarrator. There are a couple of topics I wanna cover in this review. But first I want to say that your writing is really really good. It's crisp, ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A Way

    Ooh. This is a common topic and one that's really tricky to deal with. I am so glad that you made a poem to tackle it. I am also really ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I Wish

    There is an awful lot going on in this piece. I love that you were so in touch with the emotions of the speaker that you could follow them on ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Satire Re: Being "That Kid": How NOT to be a Massive D-Bag

    Oh, Dannie. The fire in this piece is very, very, very clear. I like that you wrote about something for which you had so much emotion, because it definitely showed ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: A New World

    Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate your feelings and I think poetry can definitely be a good way to start conversation or sort out and ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Omens and Toast

    Magpie. You're great. Really, you are. You're fantastic and you explore, and I love when you explore! What I love was the opening of this poem with such strong, concrete ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: False Reality

    Ugh. This is a hard and powerful subject to face. We will all, at some point, be faced with trying to carry on after death. And whether subconsciously or consciously ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To love right people Better...

    Oh, my gosh. This is a problem for lucky people, but it can also be a very helpful situation. I like that you put it forward pretty bluntly. You just ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Spiritual Re: The girl behind that veil.

    Hey, Idrinkink~ Nice username. Haha. Okay. First I want to say that you are good at writing sentences. You play well with rhythm building up through sentences, like you did ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Venom [3]

    Ooh, I like this exploration of bitterness. For such a powerful emotion that we feel so often, it's too frequently written off as pathetic and petty. Here, you've discovered the ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chasing Dragons: Chapter One

    Hey, Stella. I'm not sure if I've reviewed anything by you before, so this is a treat! I love the smooth delivery of the premise of this story. The princess ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: They Called Me A Liar

    Hey! Okay, I don't know if this was your intention with the poem, but what I really loved was the idea I got that this outflowing of "I am not ...

    Jun 30, 2013


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