Hannah

It's really hard to write about times of intense emotion that happen in such short periods of time, but it can definitely be done. The thing is that you have ...

Okay, firstly, you need to take responsibility for your writing and make sure it is as polished as it can possibly be before posting it here. I mean, just the ...

I like the little bit of insight at the end. Most of this poem is too overdone for my taste. There's a point where writing about common experiences isn't as ...

Remy, the water master Compared to the other four descriptions, this is way less active. Others dance or tame or shake, but you use such a vague verb for Remy: ...

Hey, Jordin! Fellow Knight here, to hop on your novel as you suggested. First things first. Are you posting from a device other than your computer? Even when we're just ...

The small “Order 64” sheet [Note to self: phrase better] You might call it the number ticket. In the end, I have to larger impressions about this piece. One, I ...

Okay! Well, I'd say this is not really fit for a poem format. I think making this a prose essay would work really well. It's a powerful, intense subject, and ...

Ah! So. I am exceedingly glad that you do not steer away from gory details. In this plot, they are necessary to make the scene feel real. That said, I ...

What?! What is going on here? You skipped all the good parts!? haha. First, I love the specificity with which you talk about when you found poetry. I think the ...

Oh! Oh my gosh! I love a lot of this! I love the idea of this, haven't seen it before, and you've stumbled on some brilliant language to discuss this ...

Um. ahaha. I. I liked the reality in which this poem started. I think the image of the legs against the light is very vivid and specific and really brings ...

I think a lot of this works well. I haven't listened to the original! So! That's where my review's coming from. I love that somehow, even while being restricted to ...

Whoo. So. I think you have a good concept and a good train of thought under all of this, but what this piece really needs is for you to go ...

Huh. I am the kind of person who has always needed a plan for living, and until recently I've always known what my next step was. Now I'm sitting out ...

Ahaha, I don't know. I don't watch Doctor Who but I know the angel things are statues and if you don't look at them they come to get you or ...