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  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, Science Re: An obscure metaphor for something

    You know. When I was little I read parts of the third Harry Potter book before I ever went back and discovered the first book. This feels a little like ...

    Feb 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: Elven Grief

    1. This is very late! I'm sorry. I had this in my tabs, then moved it to review drafts, but I'm here at last and I hope you've not stopped ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Culture Re: The Man in The Mask

    I have been a big fan of Phantom of the Opera, so that's immediately what this reminded me of. I like the atmosphere: the decadence, luxury, richness of people who ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Other » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Rant (18+)

    Nike! The emotion in this piece is very clear. I love the idea that you thought the year was going to get better and it didn't. I'm going to be ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Who Says Owls Can't Fly?

    Hey, anonymou5. Firstly I want to say really quickly that I see you've posted a lot of pieces on YWS and haven't posted even one review. You are already benefiting ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: She Let the Wind Take Her Away.

    Hi, again! I hope that if you have any questions, you'll be sure to send me a PM. I can help you out if you're having trouble submitting or reviewing ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Punching Walls.

    Sherlock, I hope you're okay. I know sometimes people suck and things don't make sense and love is stupid and confusing and how are we supposed to know what will ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: An Addiction of the Mind (16+ for mature themes and mild language)

    Hello again! I want to say that I'm interested by this subject matter. I'm interested because it's not an experience I've had, and I am waiting, waiting, waiting for the ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My thoughts are Stars

    Hey there, Spark. (: I am going to say this poem, for me, revolves around the middle stanza and the idea that all this space surrounds them. That couplet is ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My hands were tied

    Pingu bby, you are going to give my my new blue star, and that's final. I think you gave me my last one, too, so let's celebrate. First, reading through ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Action / Adventure Re: Another Message From the Cosmos

    Yo, Spinelli, you can't use "albeit" like that! Look at this: Conjunction Although: "he was making progress, albeit rather slowly". Synonyms although - though - while - as - notwithstanding ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Acceptance

    Oh my gosh. I'm so glad I went down to the comments first to see the artwork you included. It has a really awesome feeling, especially paired with the words ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Glorious Ash

    I am not going to forget that bright image of pastries suddenly cropping up in the middle of all this grayness for a long time. I want to remember it, ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My pretty little heart

    Tenyo! There are some really good intentions in here. I was legitimately surprised by the mention of the black and bitten fingers, because this poem started off so soft, simple, ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love

    It's you! Welcome, SpanishFlower. I'm going to drop a review on this, but then you need to get out there and start leaving some reviews of your own, you hear ...

    Feb 1, 2013


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